If Sydney worked for Playboy

My friend had just suggested to me some ideas for fanfiction for Alias. Now she doesn’t watch Alias, which I personally think is crazy of her, but she wrote a fanfiction anyways with some input from me. She has no idea how the character personalities are, so don’t mind her and this fanfiction. But any feedback is welcome to advise me anyway I can make this fanficiton better. I know it sucks by the way, so no need to tell me that..lol..(This is kind of like a prequel to when the show started, but kinda not, also involving Lauren, so it sounds kinda crazy. It just takes place in an alternate universe.) ^_^

Disclaimer: I don’t own any aspect of Alias, the characters, or any entity of it.

Sydney is a porn star/actress. She is gorgeous and she knows it. She has worked for Playboy ever since H. Hefner invited her to the mansion three years ago. She heard that Vaughn left his wife Lauren so Syd invites him to the mansion and they f***. Vaughn is friends with Hefner so he recommends Allison/Francie to Hefner. Allison accepts and she is now a porn star. Allison meets Mike and Syd. Allison and Syd have a fight then they have f*** to make up. Then they have a threesome with Sark and all f***..Yay! Let’s have a f*** party they all say. After that, they all become friends. Sydney introduces Sark to Allison as her boyfriend. Allison tells Syd that she used to date and f*** Vaughn. Obviously, she is lying. But eventually Allison does f*** Sark and Syd is furious when she finds out. Allison and Syd gets into a fight once more, so now they hate each other. The next day, Allison and Sydney have to shoot pictures of them fingering each other. Syd hates Allison so bad that she sticks her finger really, really hard and fast into up into Allison and Allison screams in excruciating pain. Sydney starts punching and hitting Allison and gets into trouble. Allison’s “thing” hurts badly and so she goes to the hospital. The gynecologist tells her she can never have children, not that porn stars have children, but that’s not the point. But however, Allison is still mad and decides to get back at Syd. When Allison gets back from the hospital she pretends that everything is fine but she still hates Syd. One night, Syd goes to stab Allison to death with a cleaver knife she had just use to cut salami for a sub with. Then Syd and Vaughn fall madly in love. Sydney quits the porn business and to amend all her ways, she joins the CIA along with Vaughn, they get married, adopt a child, and lead a happy, happy life together….


~~~THE END~~~
 
May I please remind everyone this is not my FANFIFC!!! I have much, much much better writing skills and I don't write stuff like this, I actually watch the show and I write much much better. I basically jsut edited this for my friend the first draft was much, much worst, trust me..Full of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes ;)
 
ummm.... it could have been soooooooo much better.... more details for example... um like the simple fact that they f@@@ each other is not enough! you have to say like what they did in detail!! If you have such great writing skills, then totally delete that and start over!!!!!! the basic plot is good but with all the details of love and hate and what they say and on on on you could get that story to fit into about twenty different chapters! That right there could just be a basic rough draft and just the whole basic idea of the story could be summerized into it, but to truely catch someones attention and make them like it is where the details come in. If you don't have details you are gonna keep getting posts that say that it was a bunch of s***. So, if you aren't going to fix it DELETE IT and save us all the pain of seeing the title. It has an interesting plot, but it is just a plot.

Good Luck and God Bless

Johnny Johnson 🦋
 
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