Coffee Ice Cream
Procrastinating Updater
Just thought I would try this story and see how it works out! Please give me feedback! I am not allowed to go on the allalias site at home becuase I have aol and parential controls... soo... if you see a part of the story posted by someone else... thats the story... I just gave it to someone else to post! Okay... well here goes:
McDonalds and Butt Lovers
-Alice is 22 years old, Dannny is 23 years old along with Sydney, Vaughn is 24 years old
-Danny not dead-he and Sydney married ("happily")
-Vaughn and Alice have an on-and-off again relationship... currently they are not together but that doesn't mean the status can't change in a day...
-Francie does not exist... neither does SD-6 or the CIA (for Vaughn, Sydney, etc.)
-Vaughn's father did die but Vaughn didn't choose to follow in his father's footsteps...
-Vaughn and Sydney work at McDonald's... (not saying they aren't smart--just that they can't find anything they're interested in and something that is close by)
-Sydney and Vaughn have been friends since they were born (their parents knew each other-Jack Bristow and his father were best buddies and her mother and his mother were friends also since they were born...) Will and Sydney are friends too-not quite the same amount of time though (Will and Sydney met in 9th grade... Vaughn, Will and Sydney were the greatest friends of their school)
-Irina Devreko does not exist... Laura Bristow does though (they are the same person... Laura was not in Russian inteligence... she just fell in love with Jack in highschool...)
-Danny is a cardio doctor (like he was going to be in the show)
-Alice works as a janitor for a local hotel (she never went to college)
-This is being written in Sydney's veiw, by the way
-Sloane is Sydney's unlce, Emily is alive and married to Sloane and also: Sark is Sloane's son... he is 20 years old and married to some woman of the same age named...
~Prolouge~
When I get up from picking up this french fry... oops... freedom fry... I know Vaughn will be looking at me... I know he's looking at me now... I know the whole story... Vaughn's taking orders at the cash register... I drop a freedom fry from the pallet where freedom fries are made... Vaughn suddenly has to grab something from the shelf below the register and while he's doing this... he just happens to look at my butt... but whatever... I think it's actually quite funny... the way he watches me [imagine this in slow motion] drop the freedom fry... bend over "gracefully" and "moon" him... he doesn't seem to mind though... but must I remind him that he was best man in my wedding to Danny...? He has a girlfriend... well... sort of... but still... why can't he find someone else?... because he loves me...
*Flashback*
[It's pouring outside and they are waiting for a bus--2 years before the prolouge and rest of the story--Sydney and Vaughn are hiding in a telephone booth since the bus stop thing leaks and they don't want to get wet...]
Sydney giggles. "You know... this really is actually quite funny... how we're stuck in a telephone booth..."
"Yea? You think so? You're just saying that becuase you had to call Danny before we left McDonalds and talk to him for hours on end--" Vaughn was interupted...
"I don't talk to him that long..."
"Oh yea? Then how come it takes every bus fifteen to twenty minutes to get here and we missed three buses!"
"Oh... don't get all worked up over nothing, Vaughnster..."
"Oh don't try to sweet talk your way outta this one babe..."
"Excuse me? I'm sweet talking? Babe... what are you... someone who never met me before? You know I don't like the nickname babe!" Sydney said hitting Vaughn on the shoulder. He turned a little so Sydney lost her balance and fell forward a little bit [and remember where this is--in a small telephone booth] landing her right in Vaughn's arms... they were really close--their faces-about a half and inch apart... their bodies touching...
"Vaughn..." Sydney said slightly above a whisper. She leaned in to kiss him...
"I love you Sydney...more than anyone... anything--" Vaughn was cut-off by Sydney.
"Just shut up and kiss me..." Sydney said leaning in again. They were so close... then right when their cheeks touched the bus they were waiting for pulled up... they got in a acted as if nothing happened.
*End Flashback*
"Mrs.Hect! Wake up! NOW! Vaughn needs help out on the floor--you can take your break when you get home!" Sydney was awoken by her boss' load voice booming through her ears... since she was sleeping it was like a bomb going off in her eardrums...
"Okay... I'm going! I'm going!" Sydney said lifting her head off of the table she was leaning over dreaming of her and Vaughn on again. "Yea... where is the mess?" Sydney said grumpily as she hadn't had any good sleep really since either her honeymoon with Danny-if you call that sleep... or when Sydney and Vaughn had those sleepovers where Vaughn would start the night on the floor then somehow wind up in Sydney's bed the next morning. Ah.. those were the days-- Sydney thought before getting interupted...
"NOW!" her boss screamed.
"OKAY!" Sydney screamed back and trudged to the mess.
Feedback please!
or ?
McDonalds and Butt Lovers
-Alice is 22 years old, Dannny is 23 years old along with Sydney, Vaughn is 24 years old
-Danny not dead-he and Sydney married ("happily")
-Vaughn and Alice have an on-and-off again relationship... currently they are not together but that doesn't mean the status can't change in a day...
-Francie does not exist... neither does SD-6 or the CIA (for Vaughn, Sydney, etc.)
-Vaughn's father did die but Vaughn didn't choose to follow in his father's footsteps...
-Vaughn and Sydney work at McDonald's... (not saying they aren't smart--just that they can't find anything they're interested in and something that is close by)
-Sydney and Vaughn have been friends since they were born (their parents knew each other-Jack Bristow and his father were best buddies and her mother and his mother were friends also since they were born...) Will and Sydney are friends too-not quite the same amount of time though (Will and Sydney met in 9th grade... Vaughn, Will and Sydney were the greatest friends of their school)
-Irina Devreko does not exist... Laura Bristow does though (they are the same person... Laura was not in Russian inteligence... she just fell in love with Jack in highschool...)
-Danny is a cardio doctor (like he was going to be in the show)
-Alice works as a janitor for a local hotel (she never went to college)
-This is being written in Sydney's veiw, by the way
-Sloane is Sydney's unlce, Emily is alive and married to Sloane and also: Sark is Sloane's son... he is 20 years old and married to some woman of the same age named...
~Prolouge~
When I get up from picking up this french fry... oops... freedom fry... I know Vaughn will be looking at me... I know he's looking at me now... I know the whole story... Vaughn's taking orders at the cash register... I drop a freedom fry from the pallet where freedom fries are made... Vaughn suddenly has to grab something from the shelf below the register and while he's doing this... he just happens to look at my butt... but whatever... I think it's actually quite funny... the way he watches me [imagine this in slow motion] drop the freedom fry... bend over "gracefully" and "moon" him... he doesn't seem to mind though... but must I remind him that he was best man in my wedding to Danny...? He has a girlfriend... well... sort of... but still... why can't he find someone else?... because he loves me...
*Flashback*
[It's pouring outside and they are waiting for a bus--2 years before the prolouge and rest of the story--Sydney and Vaughn are hiding in a telephone booth since the bus stop thing leaks and they don't want to get wet...]
Sydney giggles. "You know... this really is actually quite funny... how we're stuck in a telephone booth..."
"Yea? You think so? You're just saying that becuase you had to call Danny before we left McDonalds and talk to him for hours on end--" Vaughn was interupted...
"I don't talk to him that long..."
"Oh yea? Then how come it takes every bus fifteen to twenty minutes to get here and we missed three buses!"
"Oh... don't get all worked up over nothing, Vaughnster..."
"Oh don't try to sweet talk your way outta this one babe..."
"Excuse me? I'm sweet talking? Babe... what are you... someone who never met me before? You know I don't like the nickname babe!" Sydney said hitting Vaughn on the shoulder. He turned a little so Sydney lost her balance and fell forward a little bit [and remember where this is--in a small telephone booth] landing her right in Vaughn's arms... they were really close--their faces-about a half and inch apart... their bodies touching...
"Vaughn..." Sydney said slightly above a whisper. She leaned in to kiss him...
"I love you Sydney...more than anyone... anything--" Vaughn was cut-off by Sydney.
"Just shut up and kiss me..." Sydney said leaning in again. They were so close... then right when their cheeks touched the bus they were waiting for pulled up... they got in a acted as if nothing happened.
*End Flashback*
"Mrs.Hect! Wake up! NOW! Vaughn needs help out on the floor--you can take your break when you get home!" Sydney was awoken by her boss' load voice booming through her ears... since she was sleeping it was like a bomb going off in her eardrums...
"Okay... I'm going! I'm going!" Sydney said lifting her head off of the table she was leaning over dreaming of her and Vaughn on again. "Yea... where is the mess?" Sydney said grumpily as she hadn't had any good sleep really since either her honeymoon with Danny-if you call that sleep... or when Sydney and Vaughn had those sleepovers where Vaughn would start the night on the floor then somehow wind up in Sydney's bed the next morning. Ah.. those were the days-- Sydney thought before getting interupted...
"NOW!" her boss screamed.
"OKAY!" Sydney screamed back and trudged to the mess.
Feedback please!
or ?