Ms.MichaelVaughn
Cadet
I really want to thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
I enjoyed reading every single chapter because each and every time you made me more curious to find out what the next chapter was about.
The fact that you slowly let us find out about the real reason they parted was very good. In that way you kept our attention
I also loved the way you worked out their characters and feelings.
You really did a great job with this and I wish you all the luck in every other story you're still about to write.
Lots of love and appreciation from Patricia a.k.a Trish
I enjoyed reading every single chapter because each and every time you made me more curious to find out what the next chapter was about.
The fact that you slowly let us find out about the real reason they parted was very good. In that way you kept our attention
I also loved the way you worked out their characters and feelings.
You really did a great job with this and I wish you all the luck in every other story you're still about to write.
Lots of love and appreciation from Patricia a.k.a Trish