so i read chapter 7 which is really chapter 6 :blink: that's strange what happened there? doesn't quite make sence....
you said see if we can catch you out.... well didn't weiss already have a confrontation with vaughn about him going to see sydd? why would he do that twice as if for the first time?
hp hum making slow progress here... so manyh reviews in between!
jordan just confuses me because umm.... you seem to have put a likable charecter in a syd vaughn fic that's vaughn's competition... i'm just waiting for the line
Syd: "Jordan, I like you, I mean I really like you... but..."
Jordan: "I'm not Vaughn. It's ok really I like you too, have a nice life with YOUR BABY and husband."
see i get he's nice but she is carrieing someone else's baby....
for having made her cry, the only good thing that came from Michael Vaughn was the fact that she now had two beautiful babies growing inside of her, babies that she would never let him hurt.