The Promise

:blink:

Okay I was going to start off this review by ranting on and on about how incredibly cute that chapter was, but instead, I'm going to stare at this quote for a while.

the quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog.

:Ponder:

:confused:

:blink:

*sigh* :mellow: What the heck is that meant to mean?! Does it have anything at all to do with this fic, or am I just overanalyzing it... Gee, did you put it there specifically to confuse the fajizzles out of everyone? Cos it's working :eyebrow:

Maybe... Vaughn is the fox. And um... Will is the dog. And the fox and the dog are fighting over Sydney, who can be um... The puddy tat? *squeals* I tawt I taw a puddy tat, I did, I did! I did taw a puddy tat! *rofl* Tweety ;) Anyways... So Vaughn the fox, in order to get to Sydney, jumps OVER Will the dog, who is a lazy bugger... And... Is that a moral or something? :confused:

*sigh*

I think I'm just going to get on with reviewing the story... Or babbling, since it's mostly just babbling, not really reviewing... :mellow:

ANYWHO!

:woot:

The videos and pwessies were so niiiice from her family! And such a good idea too! :woot: *giggles* I had a fwiend do that for me last year, and it's so funny... Hehe, even if I'm not in hiding from someone who wanted to kill me and my family :P

But what... Oh wait. She got the Alice In Wonderland book! :woot: *hop* How exciting! :D Hehehe... Alice in Wonderland is so cool. I have a copy from 1972 or something? Lol not the first version... But who cares, it has cool pictures. And that's all that matters, right? :D

And to top it aaaaall off...

Syd and Vaughn... *cough cough* :angelic:

Awww... The perfect chappy, Gee! It's a shame that it has to end though...

*is wishing your favourite number could be changed to 720*

:whistle: *whispers to JuJu and peanut* And I'll grab her third ankle! :woot:

Awesomely fantabulously cute chapter Geeeeeee!!!

Cai
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hey guys, its been a week... i apologize for the lateness... (n) as for the new readers, thanks for reading :hug:

btw, for the reviews, thanks a bunch!!! :throb:

CHAPTER 67

“Director! Director!” a CIA agent was shouting as he hurriedly approached Director Chaste as she was walking with a fellow agent from the Rotunda.
“We… together with… intercepted…” The agent couldn’t catch his breath as he held onto a file with a death grip as he gasps for air.
“What is it?” The agent couldn’t continue so he handed Chaste the file instead. As soon as she finished reading, she said firmly,
“Send an extraction team immediately.” She said as she wiped drops of sweat that immediately formed on her forehead.
“Hang in there, Jack.” She sighed.

*****
Sydney and Michael were both sleeping soundly when they heard loud knocks against the door. They were still a bit tired but they knew that they have to get up. Michael was the first one who made an effort to lift his upper body up but was unsuccessful when Sydney pulled him back to bed. She groaned and begged if he would stay with her.

“Syd, in as much as I enjoy this, coz you know that I absolutely do, but my stomach is giving up on me.”
“You’re right.” She said as she got out of her sheets and tried to stand up revealing her naked body, teasing him. Michael changed his mind in a blink of an eye as he gave in to the temptation. He quickly grabbed her hand and pulled her body on top of him.
“You’re right, bad idea.” He said as he caressed the side of her body down to her legs.
“Told you so.”
“You’re always right.”
“Yes I am.” She giggled. He encircled his arm tightly on her bare back pulling her closer to his body, kissing her. In the middle of their kiss they heard someone knocking at their door for the second time with a familiar voice calling out to them.
“Oh f***!” She cussed as she quickly broke away from his lips.
“Twice.” He said as he kissed her jaw. The moment he did, the voice calling out to them became persistent and louder.
“O-kay, that’s it. We really have to go.” She said as she jumped out of the bed and quickly grabbed her clothes.
“Quickly, go hide yourself under the sheets.” She said as she fixed herself and was behind the door.
“Yes Mam.” He laughed and did just like what he was told to do. The moment she saw him hid under the sheets, she opened the door.

“Juuuuliaaaaaaa!” Little Sydney said as she ran towards her to hug her legs.
“Hello sweetie!” She said as she hugged her back and stroke her hair.
“They told me to call you coz its time for dinner.”
“Awww… okay, be there in five. Alright?”
“Uhuh. See you!” Little Sydney ran back to the dining room.

“You can come out now.” She said in a chuckle.
“Riigghhhttt.” He said as he revealed his head from under the sheets.
“And wear some clothes too.”

Sydney was helping him dress up when she said,
“Michael… did I told you already that… Will sort of, told me that he loved me?”
“You just did.”
“You’re not surprised.”
“With how he looks at you… I could tell.”
“I just… coz I was surprised.”
“Anyone who will get the chance to know you, will definitely fall in love with you.”
“He doesn’t really know me… you know…”
“Or let’s put it this way… any guy who takes one good look at you, spends a little time with you will definitely fall for you.”
“Not everyone is like Will nor you Michael.”
“How about Noah?”
“Noah who?”
“Noah Hicks from senior high?”
“haha, oh that!”
“Plus that British guy we met at the bar. He practically begged for your number! Even if I was damn in front of him. He has balls.”
“But you have balls of steel. You successfully shoved him off.” She laughed.
“I have to. Or else he would have hurt you.”
“Haha! You’re the best.” She said.
“And oh I remember this rich blue eyed kid who stalked you at college.”
“Julian Sark. And Michael, he didn’t stalk me.”
“He only sent you flowers every day and followed you to the university.” He said as he nodded his head constantly.
“You’re exaggerating…”
“You know I am not.”
“I just… don’t get it…”
“It is because you are amazing, wonderful, gorgeous, kind, talented, not to mention sexy and”
“Okay stop. Don’t blow smoke up my ass Michael.”
“Hey! I am just telling the truth. You’re amazing Syd.” Michael said as he looked intently into her eyes.
“Thank you… you on the other hand… are amazing too…” She said as she kissed him on the lips.

“Back to Will… It’s just that, I feel like, it’s going to be awkward… you know…”
“I know.”
“I mean Michael… with us around him… all cuddly and lovey dovey… Not to mention, we are in fact in the Tippins’ Mansion… we could get kicked out.” She chuckled.
“So, you better lower down your tone when we you know… get all cuddly and lovey dovey.”
“These walls should better be soundproofed.” She said as she reached for the wall and placed her ear against it.
“Did I mention hidden videocameras on the corners? Bathroom? Closets?”
“MICHAEL! Don’t start on that. It’s… It’s… freaky. Really. Who would do that?”
“A desperate pervert.”
“Okay, this is too much. You are crazy and driving me paranoid.” She said as she placed both of her hands on her hips. Michael walked closer to her.
“Sydney Anne Bristow.”
“What is it Michael Christopher Vaughn?” She asked.
“You really drive me crazy woman.”
“You’re sweet.” She said blushingly. She broke the gap in between them and kissed him.

“And… oh, you should call me Julia still.” She said as she broke away and finished buttoning his polo shirt.
“Julia. Got it Bristow.” He said as he kissed her nose.
“Michael, its Thorne. My surname’s not Bristow. It’s T-H-O-R-N-E.” She said as she tapped his shoulder lightly with each letter.
“No it’s not.” He said as she grabbed her hand and kissed it.
“Yes IT IS. Now, you gotta get used to it coz I will be in great trouble if you don’t start remembering that my surname is” Michael cut her short and said,
“Vaughn.”
“What?”
“Vaughn. That’s your surname to be.” He winked at her. She blushed at his reply and grinned broadly showing her dimples. She looked at her engagement ring for a while with a satisfied smile. She looked back at him and said,
“Love you.”
“Love you Syd, I mean, Julia.” She playfully smacked his chest.
“Hey!”
“I know, sorry.” She kissed him for the last time as they both left the room and headed towards the dining room.

*****
5:04 AM

Jack and Irina were both sleeping when a faint thud was heard from the adjacent rooms where their CIA bodyguards were staying, causing them both to wake up from their slumber. Jack immediately grabbed his handgun that was on his bedside table as Irina reached for her gun under the bed. Both of them cautiously walked a few feet from the door, waiting as they both were anticipating an intruder. Both held onto their firearms as the knob was slowly turned. As soon as the door was opened, Jack immediately grabbed the intruder’s hand going behind him with his gun pointing at the intruder’s head. Irina was on standby as she too pointed a gun at the man who raised both of his hands.

“It’s just me, guys, it is just me!” one of the CIA agents who were guarding the safehouse said as his hands were both raised in surrender. Both Jack and Irina lowered their weapons as the agent continued,
“The agents from this village’s guardhouse are not responding. We have reason to believe that they may have been infiltrated.”
“I see.” Jack said.
“Have you contacted Langley?” inquired Irina.
“No. They contacted us.”
“What did they say?” asked Jack.
“They will be sending an extraction team in 0535 hours. They received intel that your location may have been compromised. We contacted the other agents for confirmation and they aren’t responding.”
“Where’s the extraction point?” asked Irina as she began to pull a suitcase from underneath the bed.
“The guardhouse.”
“Call Langley and tell them we need another extraction point.” Said Jack as he rolled a huge map of the place over the bed.
“Where?”
“Here.” He pointed to a place at the map as he ran towards the closet and took out his own suitcase.
“Got it.” Said the agent as he left the room.

3 minutes later, Jack and Irina together with 3 other agents left the safehouse as they rode on a black SUV speeding away from the village. As the car was speeding alone at the highway, a gray van came from the woods appeared and began firing at them. The enemy was successful at shooting one of the tires, forcing them to a full stop. The gray van stopped too as 5 masked men armed with heavy artillery came out of the van.

“JACK!” yelled one of the agents.
“Run towards the woods, you could reach the extraction point barefoot. We’ll take care of them!!!”
“They are heavily armed, you are only armed with pistols. 3 against 5. You couldn’t possibly take them all!!!” replied Jack in a loud tone, as constant gunshots were being fired from the enemy. He slowly peeked and fired at one of the masked men, successfully hitting his enemy at the leg.
“We can manage. You are our priority sir. Now, GO!”
“Okay.” Jack conceded.
“I’ll cover you.” another agent said as he constantly fired against the enemy letting Jack and Irina escape through the woods. A few seconds later, he was shot in the leg as soon as Jack and Irina reached the grass. Irina ran towards the agent and tried to drag him with her arms to safety. The enemy managed to shoot the agent in the head making Irina fall prostate to the ground for cover. Jack came to the rescue and fired against the enemy as Irina reached for the agent’s phone. They both ran and reached the woods as two masked men followed them from behind.

Both Jack and Irina were running through the woods as they both kept on firing their guns behind, every once in a while.
“IRINA!!! We won’t make it to the extraction point! Hand me the phone!” said Jack as they both hid on different trees as the enemy fired against them. She threw the phone at him and as soon as she did, a gunshot was fired against her. Jack managed to catch the phone and called Langley immediately and requested for a different extraction point. His last words were,
“HURRY! We can’t hold them any longer!” After the call, Irina motioned to Jack where the masked men were hiding. And with an unspoken agreement, Jack fired at one, Irina at the other, then, they continued running.

After seven minutes of running, they finally reached an open space as the chopper arrived on time. As the chopper landed, 5 CIA agents came down clad in bulletproof vests and weapons. They were only a few feet away from the chopper when the 2 masked men finally caught up to them to the open space. Immediately, the agents fired against the enemy successfully taking one down. The second one hid himself by the bushes by lying on the ground.

Jack was the first to have successfully climbed onto the chopper, being escorted by the agents. When it was Irina’s turn, she successfully lifted half of her body onto the chopper when Jack’s keen eye saw a laser gun sight mark at her shoulder. He looked back to where the enemy was taken down and saw the other enemy in a sniping position. Without hesitation, he wrapped his arms around her in a heartbeat, using his own body as cover.

Irina and Jack were lying down as the chopper began to lift. Jack’s full weight was against her as she called out to him. He didn’t move an inch. She touched his back and felt something damp. She moved her hand so she could see what it was.

“NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!” she screamed as she saw blood in her hands.

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:jawdrop:

You just killed Jack...

GEE GEE! Do you realise what you just did?! :cry: Someone get him to hopsikool!

:doctor:

DOCTOR CAI TO THE RESCUE!

*puts a bandaid over Jack's heart*
*pat pat*
*hands Jack a wowwypop*

All better!

:D

*glares at Gee* He IS going to make it through... Right? :eyebrow:

It's just... ARGH!!! How could you do that?! That's just evil...

But hey, Cai has an important question. Now that something big and exciting has happened... Is the fic going to be extended for even longer, since you could slowly nurse Jack back to health? :whistle:

Anyway, back to the point, cos I have to get through the rest of my pee emmys tonight too :P

DUDE! I is loving the fwuffyness... T'is just adorable! :love: Although it's about time that they started realising that they couldnt act all lovey dovey in front of all the Tippens all the time :rolleyes:

Anyways, Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I positively love your writing, it's just amazing :hug: And one thing also that I find particularly hard that you seem to master so easily... The speech! It just seems to flow so easily.. *clap clap* Go GEE!

:lol: Update soon dudey!

Cai
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Great chapter!! Whats going to happen when they see her engagement ring??? especially little Sydie. I could just see it now:

Syd: OOOOOOOOOOOOO pwetty wing Julia!!!!!! weared you get it????

LOL try and get yourselfs out of that!!! ha! Just please let Michael and Syd be able to stay where they are at! Don't make this difficult for them. I you do make them move AGAIN! Please let Michael go with her. It just wouldn't be fair! Its been three years and they have to split AGAIN! Come on, your not that cold hearted, I know it. let them finnaly have some peace with each other.

Great Chapter Again!!!!!
 
nonononononononononononon

*starts to hyperventalate*

you CANNOT KILL JACK

you may have borrowed Janet PM list style but don't you dear have borrowed her plot details and kill jack too!!!!!!!!!!

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

thANKS FOR THE PM
 
OMG Wow Gee!! That was great! Poor Jack I hope he will be ok! well I hope u feel loved because this is about the only fict I have been reading lately because of lack of time! I can't live with out this! j/k!! well I've got to start chatching up on my other PMs! Oh yeah thanks for the PM!!
SYD
 
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