the path of darkness

ok ppl here's the next chapt

chapter 9

"duck" said irina as she ran into the closet and shut the door.

syd and vaughn jumped to the floor, a man in a black body suit got down next to syd and pointed a gun at her head.

"come with me or i'll shoot." said a man with a british accent.

sydney twisted his arm and threw him onto the ground.

"ow, you're going to pay for that."

sark got up and hit sydney in the head with his gun, syd kicked him in his balls.

"ow, ow, ow." said sark while gasping in pain

vaughn saw what was going on and kicked sark in the back. sark got up and threw vaughn into a chair, the chair rolled over and knocked over the lamp causing the coffee table to hit the tv. all at once everything crashed to the ground.

sydney jumped onto the couch and grabbed a glass figure from the shelf above.

"please don't throw that at me."-sark

syd threw the figure at sark, but missed. sark ran over to the couch in high speed and push syd through an open window.

vaughn got up and ran over to the window hoping syd was ok.

"help me please."-syd

vaughn looked down to see syd hanging on to a single piece of siding.

"syd, hold on." vaughn carefully grabbed syd by he arm and pulled her back into the house.

sark saw that the two of them were safe and he grabbed off of the floor, pointing it at the back of syd's head. vaughn looked back,

"syd, duck."

syd slid across the couch, sark shot and missed, he shot again hitting the window. vaughn ran over to sark and pushed him to the floor, cause sark to drop his gun.

syd ran over and picked up sark's gun, pointing it at him.

"please don't shoot."

"why do you want me to come with you?"-syd

"i can't tell you that, but i can tell you that sloane wants to find you and kill you."-sark

"you SOB, tell me why you want her."-vaughn

"sloane knows that you're in the phophecy."-sark

"why are you telling me this?"-syd

"because i work for him."-sark

"duh, tell me why he or you want me."-syd

"he wants you because you are the person in the prophecy."-sark

"she can always pull the trigger."-vaughn

"what else?"-syd

"he wants you to work with us again."-sark

"are you insane?"-syd

"she will pull the trigger if she has to."-vaughn

"plus he----------- he-------- no i want to---------- nevermind."-sark

"tell me or i'll shoot."-syd

sark tried to say what he had to, but nothing came out of his mouth. syd quickly pulled the trigger, and sark just lay on the ground bleeding half to death.

"that's what happens when you don't listen to my girlfriend."-vaughn

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sorry ppl, but i have to eat lunch and a cliffhanger everyday keeps the doctor away.
 
ok and where's the shocker or missed I something? :thinking:
But again another great chapter (y) ...but I have to say the very best thing was
a cliffhanger everyday keeps the doctor away.
LMAO :D
please post more :woot:
 
oh man, i forgot that i posted that, i changed the ending because i don't think anyone would want sark to die and i decided not to make a few things said, cause it seemed alittle soon, but i promiss that the SHOCKER will happen in the next chapt. (which will most-likely be posted tomarrow or tuesday)
 
That was a shocker, but it was very good. LAMO when vaughn kept saying "she can always pull the trigger." That was a great chapter, post more soon! (y) :D

Lauren :angelic:
 
it was a shocker, but i'm not sure what i should do next, i mean make any changes, i'm going to have to think it over. i second guessing myself constintly about everything today so i think i'll just have to sit on it for a day or 2
 
hey, i never said that sark was dead, i just said that i changed the ending of chapter 9 so that he wouldn't die, cause who would want sark to die? then there's hardly any bad guys out there so he's alive for now
 
ok sorry for the wait here's the next chapt

chapter 10

"i guess sloane has even more reason to kill you now", said sark in a weak voice.

"who will you hire? anna, you know she's such an idiot. she thought i was gonna die. you even said that before. well look who's in the same place now."-syd

"why don't you just kill sloane, not me."-sark

"we can do whatever we want."-vaughn

"what aren't you going to do to me?"-sark

"i can always shoot you in the face."-syd

"in the leg would be nice. anna did that for you, so how 'bout you do that for me."-sark

sydney hit sark in the head with the gun.

"you think i'm stupid?"-syd

"stubborn maybe, stupid never."-vaughn

irina peeked out of the closet, hoping sark didn't see her.

irina's pov

yah, i know i'm an idiot. i should be out there helping them, not hiding from sark for my own personal gain. but anyhow what-so-ever i have to hide or word will get back to kendall.

no pov

irina quickly snuck her head back into the closet without sark noticing.

"anybody seen Derevko?"-sark

syd and vaughn looked at eachother "no"

"i heard that she was in kasmier, but i'm curious, where could she be."-sark

"i have a gun and i can always use it again."-syd

"if i give you my email address will you be happy?"-sark

"i used to think that you weren't so bad, i guess i was wrong", vaughn said as he grabbed out some rope from under the couch.

"we can always tie you up."-syd

sark grabbed his headset from his back pocket. "anna, you can move in now."

anna walked into the house through the open patio door.

"i should of known better not to leave you in sd-6 alone, if i only could replay that day."

"you b*t*h."-vaughn

sydney tossed over her gun, vaughn caught it, and shot he missed causing the bullet to hit the wall. he shot again aming downward at sark, missing again.

"you're an idiot."-anna

"yah, think so?" and vaughn kicked her in the butt.

"of course i had to be right about one thing. never kick a girl in the butt." anna kicked vaughn in the stomach, he fell on top of sark.

"i will always be right about one thing too. i'm the winner and you're the looser."-syd

"we'll see about that."-anna

vaughn got up, "syd, come on follow me to the car."

they ran out to the driveway and got into the black toyota. sydney turned the radio on really loud so that anna and sark would know where they were. then the drove off.

"syd."-vaughn

"what?"-syd

"your mom's still at the house."-vaughn

"they don't know that."-syd

two people got on top of their car and drilled through the back side of the car. vaughn pulled over, the two of them quickly slide under the car. anna got inside the car seeing that they weren't there and happened to look under the vehicle to see syd and vaughn hiding.

6 hours later

syd woke up in a dirty cel, far away from vaughn, a man walked in...

"i know how you feel right now, but soon enough you will be so much more than that." he said as he walked torward her cell.

sorry ppl but i love giving u guys cliffhangers to think about
 
Is this payback or something? J/k Great story, Darn cliff hangers! Post more soon, your a fantastic writer. I hope syd and Vaughn are ok. Who was that person at the end? Ahhh... your killing me here, post more soon. :woot:

Love ya,

Lauren :angelic:
 
i can't tell you who it was or it will ruin the surprize.
and what about it do you think is payback? and if anybody is curious, in order to keep you hangen i have to do that to you so have fun hangen for a couple days.
 
ok i know i'm evil, but all i'm asking for is feedback otherwise i won't keep posting it. i have chapter 11-13 done and i'm not going to post them until i get feedback.

i'll post chapter 11 tomarrow or friday, hopefully tomarrow, but i don't know for sure.
 
i think i'll be posting chapter 11 later today, but for about 3 weeks it's going to be hard for me to post. i was using my friend's computer and i used up all the memory. so now she has to get a memory upgrade and she refuses to let me use it for the rest of my life. (i don't blame her, i did use like 120-130mb of her memory, which was all she had left.) oh well i have to wait like three weeks until i can get my own laptop and make it wireless. so please be patient ppl, i can't help it that i'm currently sharing a computer with my untire family for a little while. but i promiss you as soon as i get my own computer i will post more often, that is if you do your part. (r/r please)
 
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