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One last Chance

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  1. S&V_Together

    S&V_Together Rocket Ranger

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    Author:Chickee15

    Title:One last chance

    Disclaimer:I don't own anyone or anything from Alias.It belongs to J.J.Abrams and the people at ABC

    Author's Notes:This is the sequal to 'Vaughn's dying words'

    Summary: Please R/R.......hope you like it

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    8 months later

    Sydney had decied to take an early maturnity leave.Her father had beenvery supportive since Vaughn died,
    and now his daughter was going to give birth within weeks to his child.One night Sydney had invited her father over for
    dinner,she made pasta and while they were eating Jack couldn't help but still notice the ring on Syndey's hand."Sydney,
    can I ask why you still wear that ring?"Sydney looked at him shocked,after all she had been through Vaughn's death,Slone
    and her mother still out there,Sark still our there and he goes and asks her that question."Why wouldn't I wear it dad?
    Vaughn gave it to me,and just because he's dead doesnt mean that I should just throw it away"."I didn't mean that Sydney,
    It's just that it's been 8 months since he died and I just thought that you would move on that's all."Jack answered.
    She couldn't look at him,"Dad,if you could only understand how much I loved him.And I am moving on,I mean I'm going to
    have his child within a few weeks which means starting a new chapter in my life which I had hoped to start with him,
    but that's not going to happen so I would think thatI had moved on."Jack got up from the table,he said that he was
    sorry for starting the argument than left.

    It was a strange place where he awoke,it was a cold cell but he was on a bed with wires.It looked kinda like a hospital execpt in a cage who was with him,
    he could hear voices but couldn't make them out.The last thing that he remembered was asking Sydney to marry him and putting the ring on her finger,telling
    her how much he loved her and that was it,than the next thing he knew was that he was here and alone.

    Flashback......
    Vaughn and Sark were fighting,Vaughn got a couple of punches in before Sark threw him down the stairs. Vaugnn landed on his head,
    making a slight cut above his eye. The next thing he saw was Sark pointing the gun at him. Than before Vaughn could do anything,
    "Time to die agent Vaughn" Sark pulled the trigger."Sydney, I was going to ask you tonight atdinner but I dont see that happening,
    (He coughs)so Sydney would you give me the honor by becoming my wife?" Vaughn carefully slipped on the ring as she nodded her head.
    She leaned down and kissed him, and as she pulled her head back he whispered "Sydney I love you, and remember that I always will".
    Back to reality....
    A man came walking toward him,"Mr.Vaughn it's so good of you to finally join us.Course mind you I think that was mostly my fault."It took Vaughn awhile
    but he than realized who it was,"Sark where am I and what do you want from me?"
    Sark laughed,"Mr.Vaughn, you should be thanking me after all I did save your life even though I did end it." "Thanking you, you shot me."
    "I have a touching story for you,after Sydney had finally realized that you were dead and left you on the staircase,we deciede
    to give you the opurtunity to see her one last time,but you only have a certain amount of time.No worries I'm sure that you will enjoy your final moments with her"
    Sark said as he handed Vaughn a drink,"Very touching.?"Sark only looked at him,"My job was only to bring you here and tell you that you have another
    chance to be with Sydney and that's it."
    Syndey lie in her bed looking at the ceiling with her hands on her tummy just thinking,'Vaughn I wish that you could be there for the birth of our baby
    just to see you one last time and to know that your here with me.'She turned to look out the window only to see what she thought was
    Vaughn,she closed her eyes than quickly looked back no one was there.It was just imagination playing tricks on her.

    Vaughn lie in his cell thinking about Syndey,'If I ever get out of here how am I ever going to face you.You've probably moved on with your life,oh Sydney how
    much I loved you...'Vaughn's thoughts were distracted by someone opening the cell door.At first he couldn't see who it was but once they step into the sunlight he
    saw them clearly."Irina Derevko,what do I own the pleasure of this.........."She placed her hand over his mouth,"You don't have much time".Vaughn didn't hesitate,
    as he followed her out of the building.Once he thought that they were far enough way he
    turned to her,"Why did you help me?"Irina smiled,"Did Sark not tell you, this is your final chance to see Syndey...she's about to give birth and I just thought that...."
    "Wait, did you say that she was about to give birth?"he asked with a shocked look on his face."She found out about a month after you were 'killled'.Vaughn gave a
    smile, he couldn't believe that Sydney was going to have a baby."Where are we?"he asked,Irina smiled and told him that they were in LA. Without discussing
    anything more,Vaughn took off heading to the one person whom he despertly needed to see Sydney.
    Back at Syndey's......
    Sydney couldn't help but keep on thinking about the other night,with her seeing Vaughn's image outside in her yard.While she was again lost in thougth,it had started
    to rain.She use to love the rain,her and Vaughn would go for walks and have romantic nights when it rained but it made it more special for some reason.Just than a
    knock came at the door,Sydney looked at her watch it was 11pm,who would be knocking at her door at that time of night? When she opened the door she couldn't
    believe who it was."Hi Sydney",Vaughn said with smile on his face.Sydney couldn't believe it,he was back from the dead and he had just said hi.Vaughn caught her
    before she fell on the floor from fainting,he couldn't believe how heavy she was but than remembered that she was pregnant.
    An hour later she finally came too,opening her eyes to find Vaughn staring at her,"Is it really you?" she asked,Vaughn smiled than kneeled beside her "It's really me
    baby, and speaking of babies is it mine?".Sydney smiled and nodded her head,she sat up and gave him a huge hug which was than followed by a long passionate
    kiss."Vaughn how did you, I mean where did you?"Sydney just couldn't get the words out but Vaughn knew what she was asking him,"I was shot,but that's not what
    matter's. All that matter's is that Im here with you,im here for you Sydney no matter what happens."Sydney was shocked to what she had just heard,she
    started to cry.He stood up than took Vaughn's hand leading him to her bedroom,"Hold me tonight so that I know its really you",he didn't object.
    Laying right beside her with his hand on her tummy he felt the baby kickjust than Sydney started to cry out in pain."Vaughn my water just broke....
    "he quickly got up than helong Sydney up they rushed and grabbed a few things than headed for the hospital."Sydney jsut breath,come on babe
    breath....should we let your dad know where we're going?" Vaughn asked as he paid close attention to the road.Sydney took out her cell phone from her
    purse and dialed her dad's number."Dad......it's me...........im on my way to the.....hospital.....who's driving me???...........Vaughn is but I....can't explain.........
    ok...see you there.(looking at Vaughn)he's going to meet us there."
    At the hospital.....
    Jack Bristow came running into the ER,"I'm looking for a Sydney Bristow??Does anyone know...."Just than he thought that maybe he had seen a ghost walking
    towards him."Jack,she's okay.....she's almost ready to deliever."Vaughn said as Jack just stared at him."You were dead,I was at your funeral", was all that Jack
    could get out.
    About 10 miutes later you could hear baby cries coming from Sydney's room,"Congradulation's Miss Bristow you have a healthy baby boy."Announced the
    doctor,Vaughn kissed Syndey on the forehead,"What do you want to call him?"Sydney looked at her baby son and smiled,"What about Michael Daniel Vaughn".
    Vaugn looked down at Syndey smiled and nodded his head. He couldn't believe it,it was just 3 hours ago he had seen Syndey for the first time in 8 months,and now
    he's a father.He now realized what Sark and Irina had been telling him....,"Syndey I love you and I always will you know that right and that I'll always be there
    for you and Mickey" he said as he padded his son's forehead.Sydney smiled,"I know". The nurse in the room looked at her in confusion,"Who are you talking to
    dear,there's no one here" Sydney looked around in confusion,'where was Vaughn',she smiled at the nurse and simply said,"I know".
    Jack came into the room and looked around,"Where'd Vaughn go?",she simply smiled and told him that he was here for the birth of their son just as she had wished
    for,for her to see him one last time,for him to let her know that he was there with her.Mickey stared out the window and his first smile came across his face,it seemed
    that he was looking something.Sydney saw this and knew exaclty what he was looking at.......Vaughn.

    The End

    P.s I did bring Vaughn back but as you can tell from the story he was still dead but at least it was happy....sorry if it doesn't make much sense.


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  2. Kristina

    Kristina Rocket Ranger

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    That was a great story, but why did Vaughn still have to die? :(
    GOD BLESS AMERICA!!!
     
  3. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    wait so vaughn was just an apparition(spelled wrong)?

    it was cute but why name the baby danny?? that's too freaky to me i mean think about it - danny -dead, michael-dead. i dont mena to sound harsh, but i seriously dont get that part. but i like him being a ghost and back for the birth
     
  4. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    OH NO VAUGHN'S REALLY DEAD??? I'M TEARY HERE THAT'S SO SAD!! BUT THEN YOU SHOULD HAVE HAD IT MICHAEL DANNY NOT DANNY MICHAEL.
     
  5. S&V_Together

    S&V_Together Rocket Ranger

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    No problem I will change the name,your right the baby should be named Michael Danny...thanks
     
  6. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

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    I love it!!!Real good story!! :) :D
     
  7. Aliasfan23

    Aliasfan23 Rocket Ranger

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    hahahah
     
  8. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    ah thats very good. K now Im happy. :D
     
  9. S&V_Together

    S&V_Together Rocket Ranger

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    Thanks again for the replies, i was actually thinking on writing another story kinda like a sequal to this one only set in the future.Maybe it could be about her and her son and how their life is........just a though
     
  10. btvaughn

    btvaughn Rocket Ranger

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    Wow....that was really good. I mean I was getting all excited that Vaughn might be back, but no, he was still dead. ::cry:: Oh Vaughn, come back!
     
  11. Bondgal2007

    Bondgal2007 Rocket Ranger

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    I love this story! And yeah GOd Bless our troops!
     
  12. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    heheheh If your gonna write another story ya just gotta have Vaughn in it. hehehehe :P
     
  13. S&V_Together

    S&V_Together Rocket Ranger

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    This is a short seqaul set 7 years after Vaughn has died.

    Author:Chickee Title:The Visit Disclaimer:I dont own anyone or anything else from alias,it belong to J.J. Abrams and the people at ABC. Rating: PG-13 Summery:It's been 7 years since Vaughn's death,Sydney takes her son to his fathers grave. ********************************************************************************
    *************************** Seven years after Vaughn had been shot and killed by Sark Syndey had quit the CIA and decied that she would become a teacher and raise her son on her own. On the 7th anniversary of Vaughns death, Syndey took her son Michael Jr,to his father's grave just like she had done six years earlier. Michael Jr loved hearing stories about his father and how brave,smart he was and how much he loved Sydney.And of course it made Sydney feel better remember Vaughn in all the best ways possible instead of the way he was killed,she loved telling her son about his father. When they arrived to his grave Michael Jr placed flowers on the tomb than took out a piece of paper and showed it to hismom."Mommy grandpa helped me write daddy a letter,do you think I could read it to him?" Sydney smiled 'of course honey". Michael Jr,stood in frontof the tomb and started reading.."The day I was born,I remember you there. But as I grew you were nowhere,Than I was told,that you had died.Not because you lied but because you loved my mother and she loved you.You were given one last chance to see heand you did the day I was born.Seven years have now gone by and not one day do I go without thinking about you.I know that you are there for meand me for you,I know that your watching us each and everyday because you said that you would never stop loving us."Syndey looked at her son and started to cry,she couldn't believe that her son had wrote that.She gave him a hug and asked him if he wanted to leave it for his father.Michael Jr nodded,as he placed the paper down he looked in the distance and saw the same man he remembered seeing the day he was born.In the distance he could see his father with a smile on his face. Michael Jr,smiled than headed off to the car,leaving Syndey alone.When she turned around she saw Vaughn standing right in front of her. "Oh my god" was all she could say,Vaughn smiled,"Syndey I can't believe it's been seven years.I've missed you soo much,not being able to hold you when your sad to touch you.I wish that I had never died that day if I knew that it was going to leave you in so much pain." Sydney shook her head,"Vaughn I was in alot of pain but when you were with me in the delivery room I knew that everything was going to be okay.I do miss you,but you gave me our son." She looked at him as if he were real,wanting to hug him but she knew she couldn't,she smiled than started to walk away but tunred aroundwhen she heard Vaughn call her name,"Syndey you know thatJr wasent wrong." She looked at him wtih a confused look."What do you mean?"Vaughn looked down at the paper on his tomb,"what he said about me watching the two of you each and everyday.And I will continue to do so. I love you Sydney and I always will." Sydney told him that she loved him too than headed back towards the car where her son was waiting.'Did you talk to dad?",Michael Jr asked.Syndey smiled, and nodded her head."Mom,how come we are the only ones who can see him?" Jr asked hismother as she started to drive.She noticed that Vaughn was still standing by his tomb,than she answered her son "beacause sweetie he's our guardian angel". Than they drove off.... The End


    Please review..i know that's its probably not as good as my other stories
     
  14. Ms.MichaelVaughn

    Ms.MichaelVaughn Rocket Ranger

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    I ACTUALLY LIKED IT....A LOT....YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER... (y) :D :redhair:
     
  15. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    ah yes i love it. "My guardian angel..." I just love it.

    -VL ^_^
     
  16. Aliasfan23

    Aliasfan23 Rocket Ranger

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    Very GOOD!
     
  17. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    great sequel. and i mean GREAT!
     
  18. S&V_Together

    S&V_Together Rocket Ranger

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    thanks for the reply's it mean alot....the gurdian angel bit i thought would be good considering thats what Syd once said to Vaughn..i thought it would add a nice touch...thanks again
     
  19. FrEeLaNcEr03

    FrEeLaNcEr03 Rocket Ranger

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    :( awwwwwwwwwww
    i was literally tearing up
    that was so sad
    really enjoyed it
    great story :brokenheart:
     
  20. *twinkletoes*

    *twinkletoes* Rocket Ranger

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    omg, that was so good, yet so sad!

    ur really talented, you should write a new fanfic thats not s sad.

    ems
     

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