bluheart13
Cadet
Ok everyone this is my first fan fic. So please, criticism is welcomed. The song is Paradise (which is also the title) by Vanessa Carlton. Hope you all like. And it is a little short.
Paradise
Sydney stood on the ledge. She stood there, but for what purpose. Well, there is no purpose in her life. It flew away on that day, the day the one she loved died.
*Once upon a year gone by, she saw herself give in. Every time she closed her eyes she saw what could have been*
Whenever Sydney closed her eyes she saw him. His beautiful, green eyes, his wonderful smile, his loving hugs, everything about him was amazing to her, but it hurt also……
*Well nothing hurts and nothing bleeds when covers tucked in tight. Funny when the bottom drops how she forgets to fight...to fights*
Why she stood on that ledge she knows not why. Maybe it…it will lead her to her paradise…………with him.
*And it’s one more day in paradise, one more day in paradise. On last chance to feel alright……………………*
So yay or nay. I hope you all liked it. I know it’s sort of depressing, but I just hope you like it. I know it’s short but sweet (well sort of?)
Timmy :blink:
Paradise
Sydney stood on the ledge. She stood there, but for what purpose. Well, there is no purpose in her life. It flew away on that day, the day the one she loved died.
*Once upon a year gone by, she saw herself give in. Every time she closed her eyes she saw what could have been*
Whenever Sydney closed her eyes she saw him. His beautiful, green eyes, his wonderful smile, his loving hugs, everything about him was amazing to her, but it hurt also……
*Well nothing hurts and nothing bleeds when covers tucked in tight. Funny when the bottom drops how she forgets to fight...to fights*
Why she stood on that ledge she knows not why. Maybe it…it will lead her to her paradise…………with him.
*And it’s one more day in paradise, one more day in paradise. On last chance to feel alright……………………*
So yay or nay. I hope you all liked it. I know it’s sort of depressing, but I just hope you like it. I know it’s short but sweet (well sort of?)
Timmy :blink: