hey a,
no quotes today, my damn work computer is making me nuts. i've tried to pm you, and i don't think that worked either. grrrr.
from the last 2 chappies:
-i loved the line about digging in manure, that was brill
hell, eating manure even, if he throws in that lopsided grin along with those eyes!!!
-those other 5 kids: well, high school girls can be such b***hes, as well as i can recall. and kyle? well, he just wasn't getting any, and we KNOW how that makes people behave (or not as the case may be...)
-and to remember who said "i love you" first is funny. i do that to my man, and his reply is "firsties? what is this, 2nd grade?" eh.
-i'm glad you didn't try to keep going and going. i think it ended in just the right place. AND I'M NOT JUST SAYING THAT SO YOU'LL GO WRITE MORE ABOUT JOLIE!!! seriously.
overall, i think this story was wonderfully written, and brought back a lot of memories of high school that probably should remain buried for the rest of eternity
hope this damn thing works.
hugs,
t