Alias Elle
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Why do I keep not posting on a lot of these stories? Oh well, please write more soon.
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Alias*Kelli
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Sorry I haven't wrote in like forever but I've been working on my other one a lot. So heres more.O yeah i don't remember if I said this but when there are these () things that means someones thought. Ok
Chapter 3
**Vaughn's Office**
Sydney-''Alice Gaven I think I was so mad that might not be right.''(She just relizeed that was Vaughn's girlfriends name)''I'm sorry it's just that I have no one else to tell because Will's gone and Francies out of town I'm sorry I never should have said anything.''
Vaughn-''No thats Ok I'm here for you.''(I loved Sydney scince the first time her saw her, but I loved Alice too. How could she ever do this to me.)
Sydney-''I'll see you later, sometime. Bye.''
Vaughn-''Bye''
Sydney left. And Vaughn dailed Alice's nimber
Vaughn-''Hey Alice you want to go out for lunch?''
Alice-''Sure where at.''
Vaughn-''Oh I'll come and pick you up.''
Alice-''Ok see you in about five minutes then.''
Vaughn-''Yeah see ya later.''
He hung up.
Five Minutes Later at Vaughn's House
Vaughn-''Alice a we need to talk, now.''
Alice-''Why what's wrong.''
Vaughn-''Danny's whats wrong.''
Alice-''Who's Danny?''
Vaughn-''I think you know who Danny is or do you want me to tell you what I know.''
Alice-''What you think you know.''
Vaughn-''Ok Danny your side guy or maybe your main guy and I'm your side guy. He was going to get married to Sydney Bristow, until she cought you guys last night.''
Alice-#now crying#''I'm sorry Michael I never ment for this to happen.''
Vaughn-''I know you never ment to get cought, but you did so now get out!''
Alice-''Mike please.'' She reached out to hug him. He backed away
Vaughn-''Get away from me and get out now!'' He left leaving Alice all alone, crying.
Ok I know it's not a lot but this story isn't taking the turn I think I wanted it to sorry I might stop it because with my other one it comes to me really easy and this one is a lot harded and I'm not giving it the attention it needs to be good sorry but I think I'm gonna stop. If you haven't go read my other story 'Over-hearing'. Sorry I just had to get rid of Alice I hate her so much! Sorry!
Kelli
Chapter 3
**Vaughn's Office**
Sydney-''Alice Gaven I think I was so mad that might not be right.''(She just relizeed that was Vaughn's girlfriends name)''I'm sorry it's just that I have no one else to tell because Will's gone and Francies out of town I'm sorry I never should have said anything.''
Vaughn-''No thats Ok I'm here for you.''(I loved Sydney scince the first time her saw her, but I loved Alice too. How could she ever do this to me.)
Sydney-''I'll see you later, sometime. Bye.''
Vaughn-''Bye''
Sydney left. And Vaughn dailed Alice's nimber
Vaughn-''Hey Alice you want to go out for lunch?''
Alice-''Sure where at.''
Vaughn-''Oh I'll come and pick you up.''
Alice-''Ok see you in about five minutes then.''
Vaughn-''Yeah see ya later.''
He hung up.
Five Minutes Later at Vaughn's House
Vaughn-''Alice a we need to talk, now.''
Alice-''Why what's wrong.''
Vaughn-''Danny's whats wrong.''
Alice-''Who's Danny?''
Vaughn-''I think you know who Danny is or do you want me to tell you what I know.''
Alice-''What you think you know.''
Vaughn-''Ok Danny your side guy or maybe your main guy and I'm your side guy. He was going to get married to Sydney Bristow, until she cought you guys last night.''
Alice-#now crying#''I'm sorry Michael I never ment for this to happen.''
Vaughn-''I know you never ment to get cought, but you did so now get out!''
Alice-''Mike please.'' She reached out to hug him. He backed away
Vaughn-''Get away from me and get out now!'' He left leaving Alice all alone, crying.
Ok I know it's not a lot but this story isn't taking the turn I think I wanted it to sorry I might stop it because with my other one it comes to me really easy and this one is a lot harded and I'm not giving it the attention it needs to be good sorry but I think I'm gonna stop. If you haven't go read my other story 'Over-hearing'. Sorry I just had to get rid of Alice I hate her so much! Sorry!
Kelli
Aliasfan23
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No keep Going its good
musically83
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this fanfic is GOOD! What's the other one you mentioned that you've been spending your time on?!?!?!?
Alias Elle
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Oh, and I just read it too...
Sorry, I can't remember titles.
I have to agree, though, I don't believe this one has the quality the other one does. It has potential, but unless you can give it your full attention, it won't amount to much.
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Sorry, I can't remember titles.
I have to agree, though, I don't believe this one has the quality the other one does. It has potential, but unless you can give it your full attention, it won't amount to much.
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spysurfergrl247
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Vaughn better not go back with Alice cause ill die!!!Pleas write more!! 
Alias*Kelli
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The name of my other one in 'Over-hearing'. It's a lot a lot better than this one!
Kelli
Kelli
Alias Elle
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They are both good! You just have to give each an equal amount of time!
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Alias*Kelli
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Sorry but I'm in scholol right now and I'm not doing what I should be doing. I just can't give them equale time and I don't think this story is good. The other one is a lot better.
Kelli
Kelli
Alias Elle
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Well, then try harder or finish one then turn your full attention to the other.
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Alias*Kelli
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Ok I don't know where to go with this story so I'm gonna have to stopit it's not very good at all! My other one is a lot lot better. Sorry
Kelli
Kelli
Alias Elle
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You're giving up too easily.
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Bondgal2007
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You can't stop! I love this story! If you want AIM me and I 'll help you and you can help me with mine! Please don't Stop! I beg you!
aliaschick4mv
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There's no reason to stop! I mean, you must have an ending right? I mean this is an SV story right? So just work your way towards that, it doesn't matter how long it is. WHen I write a fanfic, I have like 3 main ideas that MUST happen, and the rest of it just connects everything. Then it ends up being more than 3 ideas, but that's my mentallity when I write these fanfics. Maybe that will help you.
pennstatechic
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Keep it going, I hope I see a vaughn and syd pair up in the future! Post more soon please, great story!
xxmrsvaughnxx
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At first I was hesitant about reading this because of your way of writing it kinda script style, but now I am loving it! Alias Elle is right, you shouldn't give up so easily! Make us happy and keep writing this one!!!
Alias Elle
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See, everyone agrees with me.
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Alias*Kelli
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Ok I'll try to keep going just give me sometime to rethink things you know and if any of you want to help me write you can so I can get any idea of what you all want it's just I don't know I just don't know where to go and if any of you have an idea just write it on here. I couls really use the help.
Kelli
Kelli
