Aliasrulz4ever
Cadet
hey omg its been weeks since i looked on this page & ur still not to page 20? thats
just cruel punnishment...
ok well i dont know if this will help any
but if it does..... YAY!!
ok so can't wait till we get to page 20!!!
:lol:
*kisses*
~maris~
just cruel punnishment...
ok well i dont know if this will help any
but if it does..... YAY!!
ok so can't wait till we get to page 20!!!
:lol: *kisses*
~maris~
aliasrocks515
Cadet
Sorry it took me so long to reply. Great story. Please update and thanx for the p.m.
no1secretagent
Cadet
wow this is a great fic. can i please get a PM when u next update?
okelay
Cadet
I can read your suffering...its nice to see my fics so appreciated.
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okelay
Cadet
Good news!!! update has arrived!!!! a bit short,im sorry
but more will come.
Chapter 11
Syd and Vaughn were sitting on the terrace of The Red Box, a popular diner-bar of LA
It was a bright,sunfilled,typical californian day.
They had been there for about an hour,talking,mostly about what to do when Mike’s leg healed.
Vaughn was tryin’ to convince Syd to let him take her shopping, as a thank you present.
He wasnt succeding.
Apparently,Sydney was too altruistic to want something in return.
“You really are a piece of work,syd,you know that?”
”I am? Why is that?”
“Ive never met a girl who refuses to go shopping for free”
“I had never met a guy who would be so interested in buyin me clothes.
What is it, you wanna see me in underwear?”
“As interesting as it sounds,no, i was simply offering a gift.”
“Now,if you want me to see you half-naked,i have no problem..”
“In your dreams!” she chuckled , swating him.
~*~
“So,will you let me take you shopping?”
“No,but you can come with me to the mall. I just wont let you pay”
“Fine, it’s a deal”
“Ok,let’s got to the mall”
He smiles.
*~*
Shopping.
The most dangerous addiction for women.
Sydney,like her pairs,loves to shop
Shopping is for most women, like sport or watching them is to men.
They love and the opposite sex doesnt get why.
Right now, Michael is wishing he could be on his appartment, watching a hockey game.
They have been at the mall for more than 3 hours.
At first ,Sydney had been calmed, she wasnt that interesed in shopping,but more into her and vaughn’s conversation.
That stage has been long forgotten.
Michael is sitting on a bench with more than 15 bags at his feet, waiting for sydney to come out of the bathroom
He’s bussy dwelling on his sore feet, even though he hasnt walked that much- he is wounded after all- he is still tired.
A couple around his own age approached him.
“Hi” the woman says
“Hi”
“Do you mind taking us a picture?”
“No problem. First time on LA?”
“Not really, but we just moved here. Thanks”
“dont mention it.”
”Im Emma and this is james”
“Nice to meet you, Im Michael”
”Right back at you. Honey, i gotta go to the bathroom, wait here ,ok?”
“Sure. Mind if i seat?”
“Go ahead.
So,why did you move to LA?”
”Work. We work for the government.”
“You work together?”
”Yeah. He’s my partner. Suppously we cant date, but we kinda overlook that rule”
“Those rules are pretty useless if you ask me”
~*~
‘Who is she? Who is that barbie flirting with my boyf--?
wait a second,what am i saying?
he can flirt with whoever he wants. He’s not my boyfriend’
“Hey, mike, let’s go?” Syd said,ignoring the blonde woman sitting next to him
“Hey, Syd. This is Emma, she just moved to LA”
“HI Emma,nice to meet you”
“A pleasure,Sydney”
“So, i was thinking we could show her around town”
“Sure,that sounds..nice”
”Oh,look there comes James”
”Hey, James, come meet michael’s girlfriend!”
”We’re not..”
“He’s not”
Both syd and michael started when a voice interrumpted
“Bristow? Is that you?”
Syd looks at the young man staring at her, tryin to place him
“James Lennox!! Oh my god!”
“You two...know each other??” A confused michael and emma ask.
“Sure we do. We went to highschool together” James explains
“You did? That’s..awesome” Says emma, feeling less-than-friendly towards sydney now.
”What are you doing here? Last i heard,you were in europe”
”We just moved to LA”
”We were going to the food court to get a drink. Wnna join us?
Im sure you have a lot of catching up to do”
“Sure. I mean , if that’s ok with you,emma”
“It’s fine”she says,with a smile that doesnt reach her eyes “Let’s go”
***
“Jimmy!”
but more will come.
Chapter 11
Syd and Vaughn were sitting on the terrace of The Red Box, a popular diner-bar of LA
It was a bright,sunfilled,typical californian day.
They had been there for about an hour,talking,mostly about what to do when Mike’s leg healed.
Vaughn was tryin’ to convince Syd to let him take her shopping, as a thank you present.
He wasnt succeding.
Apparently,Sydney was too altruistic to want something in return.
“You really are a piece of work,syd,you know that?”
”I am? Why is that?”
“Ive never met a girl who refuses to go shopping for free”
“I had never met a guy who would be so interested in buyin me clothes.
What is it, you wanna see me in underwear?”
“As interesting as it sounds,no, i was simply offering a gift.”
“Now,if you want me to see you half-naked,i have no problem..”
“In your dreams!” she chuckled , swating him.
~*~
“So,will you let me take you shopping?”
“No,but you can come with me to the mall. I just wont let you pay”
“Fine, it’s a deal”
“Ok,let’s got to the mall”
He smiles.
*~*
Shopping.
The most dangerous addiction for women.
Sydney,like her pairs,loves to shop
Shopping is for most women, like sport or watching them is to men.
They love and the opposite sex doesnt get why.
Right now, Michael is wishing he could be on his appartment, watching a hockey game.
They have been at the mall for more than 3 hours.
At first ,Sydney had been calmed, she wasnt that interesed in shopping,but more into her and vaughn’s conversation.
That stage has been long forgotten.
Michael is sitting on a bench with more than 15 bags at his feet, waiting for sydney to come out of the bathroom
He’s bussy dwelling on his sore feet, even though he hasnt walked that much- he is wounded after all- he is still tired.
A couple around his own age approached him.
“Hi” the woman says
“Hi”
“Do you mind taking us a picture?”
“No problem. First time on LA?”
“Not really, but we just moved here. Thanks”
“dont mention it.”
”Im Emma and this is james”
“Nice to meet you, Im Michael”
”Right back at you. Honey, i gotta go to the bathroom, wait here ,ok?”
“Sure. Mind if i seat?”
“Go ahead.
So,why did you move to LA?”
”Work. We work for the government.”
“You work together?”
”Yeah. He’s my partner. Suppously we cant date, but we kinda overlook that rule”
“Those rules are pretty useless if you ask me”
~*~
‘Who is she? Who is that barbie flirting with my boyf--?
wait a second,what am i saying?
he can flirt with whoever he wants. He’s not my boyfriend’
“Hey, mike, let’s go?” Syd said,ignoring the blonde woman sitting next to him
“Hey, Syd. This is Emma, she just moved to LA”
“HI Emma,nice to meet you”
“A pleasure,Sydney”
“So, i was thinking we could show her around town”
“Sure,that sounds..nice”
”Oh,look there comes James”
”Hey, James, come meet michael’s girlfriend!”
”We’re not..”
“He’s not”
Both syd and michael started when a voice interrumpted
“Bristow? Is that you?”
Syd looks at the young man staring at her, tryin to place him
“James Lennox!! Oh my god!”
“You two...know each other??” A confused michael and emma ask.
“Sure we do. We went to highschool together” James explains
“You did? That’s..awesome” Says emma, feeling less-than-friendly towards sydney now.
”What are you doing here? Last i heard,you were in europe”
”We just moved to LA”
”We were going to the food court to get a drink. Wnna join us?
Im sure you have a lot of catching up to do”
“Sure. I mean , if that’s ok with you,emma”
“It’s fine”she says,with a smile that doesnt reach her eyes “Let’s go”
***
“Jimmy!”
pennstatechic
Cadet
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This was such a great update, and yes FINALLY!!! THank you so much. It was so cute. Thanks for the pm, and post more soon.
Love ya,
Penny
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This was such a great update, and yes FINALLY!!! THank you so much. It was so cute. Thanks for the pm, and post more soon.
Love ya,
Penny
ariesgirly2lovesMV
Cadet
great chapter cant wait for more
thanks for the pm
thanks for the pm
krzykty57789
Cadet
FINALLYY!!!
that was so great, why cant s/v go out already, they love eachother
great chapter
cant wait for more
loved it
that was so great, why cant s/v go out already, they love eachother
great chapter
cant wait for more
loved it
Aliasrulz4ever
Cadet
great update! thnx 4 that. i really needed that. took us long enough to reach page 20! go all of us who contributed into making it to page 20! ok ok great update & thnx 4 the pm!
Mad bout Alias
Cadet
Finally, but it was a great chapter! When are Syd and Vaughn gonna get together????? Coz you made us wait forever you have to update soon
Thanxs for the PM!
Thanxs for the PM!
vartancrazy24
Cadet
this is really good can on b on ur pm? cant wait 4 the next update
aliasgirl89
Cadet
It's cool they went to school together!
~ASH~
~ASH~
livesonspoilers
Cadet
hey good story just finished reading the 20 pages.... wast with the making them post until 20 pages???? :blink: kinda strange i gota say but i like the story but im a bit confused by the last post.Arent vaughn and syd offically dating?????.. oh well
~sarah~
can i get a pm when u update....
I love vaughn and syd being together!!!! even if not offical
~sarah~
can i get a pm when u update....
I love vaughn and syd being together!!!! even if not officalalias_mvjg
Cadet
that was great
i hope you put the next update up sooner
when you do could you PM me please
thanx
i hope vaughn and syd get together soon
your a great writer
kate
i hope you put the next update up sooner
when you do could you PM me please
thanx
i hope vaughn and syd get together soon
your a great writer
kate