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Fanfic game2 1/2

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Chanel, Mar 8, 2003.

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  1. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    ok so i was thinking to myself wat would happen if i post the same 1st part of my story in 2 differnet places... then i thought.. id get 2 different stories, so here is the 1st part of FAnFIC GAME 2 1/2... (which is the same as fanfic GAME 2! lets see the differences and the simalarities between them... and plez dont go write the same thing in both games. This is a test to see if this works and to see the opnions and views of other...so dont mess it up.(this is pasted from the general fanfic pg)

    ok same as the game that was under romance fic only w/ a different starting point! ok here it goes... if u dont no how to play ill write a few lines and then someone else will take over and write a few more ok heres the 1st post...

    "joey's Pizza"
    "wrong number sorry" said syd in her kitchen francie was sitting near by. watching syd closely with agrim smile on her face .Sydney doesnt seem to relized this. she hangs up the phone.
    "I have to go to the bank" sydney lies to francie.
    "OKay see you soon," francie has the fakest smile on her face. Still syd doesnt notice. francie says one more thing before syd leaves.
    "make sure ur back by 6... i have a surprise for you." she says surprise w/ a wierd tone.
    "sure ill be back by then"
    ~~~

    At the warehouse.
    "You have to be back by six...," says vaughn, "i guess our date is cut short then" he says with a grin. "instead of a mission we are goign to see the kings!"
    "Vaughn, we litterally dont have mission? Is that wat your saying?" syd asks witha slight tone of happiness.
    I would love to go to that game.. but is he serious..? syd thought to herself.
    "actaully we do, but kendall didnt release the material for it so... we are goign to the game..." vaughn said.
    ~~~~
    Its 6:00 syd bursts through the door... Before she gets in she screams a welcoming "francie" in an im home sorta voice. But then she regrets ever coming home...
    (dundun da)
     
  2. SiriCerasi

    SiriCerasi Rocket Ranger

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    I'll try my hand at it ^_^

    The whole place was torn up. Lamps overturned, couches slashed, glasses broken... even the tv had been smashed.

    Sydney looked around in horror. It looked exactly as it had when Danny had been killed. She glanced fearfully at the closed bathroom door.

    "Francie?" she whispered. Then, louder, "Francie? FRANCIE!"
     
  3. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    Sydney found Francie's body lying on the ground. The only problem was that it looked like she had been dead for weeks. Sydney's eyes filled with tears. She felt a presence behind her. She spun around to see...
     
  4. *twinkletoes*

    *twinkletoes* Rocket Ranger

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    i'll try this..........


    syd- Francie? but.......?!?

    "francie"- yes yes yes, you poor firnd has been dead for weeks, and u never knew it. its time that..................

    haha

    ems
     
  5. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    I'm obsessed with this thing. Here I go again.

    "...You die." Francie raised her gun at Sydney. Sydney shut her eyes, knowing what was coming. A gunshot went off. But she didn't feel anything. Strong arms that she autimatically, without opening her eyes, knew were Vaughn's encircled her. She began to cry.
    "Vaughn... Francie is dead. She's been dead."
    "I know. The CIA was looking into her."
    "Who is this b*&ch?!"
     
  6. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    "this b*** is none other than.... well u see we were looking into francie and well... she was doubled w/..." vaughn was trying to hold something off..
    Syd the said, "well who is she?" impatiently.
    "alice," vaughn said reluctantly.
    "she was using u the whole time and we dint even notice!" explain syd.
    "yeah, iguess, "
    "thats even more the reason for me to be w/ u"
    "yeah.." They kiss passionately.
     
  7. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    oo wait i have to add to make it more clif hanger.

    Then she heard a moan. Francie (the fakie) wasn't dead and was reaching for the gun.
     
  8. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    OK I'll take a swing at it.

    Evil Francie-''Oh their last moments together isn't that so cute, well not really.''

    Vaughn-''What the he11?''
    BOOM
    Weiss-''Come on you guys we have to get out of here now!''

    Kelli
     
  9. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    I've gotta stop doing this. ITS ADICTIVE!!

    But, as it turns out, Weiss misses Freplica. She slowly gets up as Syd and Vaughn run out the door.
    "Hey, idiots." The three spin around, (why they answer the that I don't know) fear etched on their faces. "You missed." Freplica had a smile on that sent chills down their spines.
    "Alice, why are you doing this?" asked Vaughn.
    "Why! Why! You were dating ME while constantly thinking of HER! You @$$hole!"
    SHe pointed the gun at Vaughn and pulled the trigger.
     
  10. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    BAng! (really bad sound effect)
    Alice (Freplica) falls to the floor. Weiss had shot her.
    VAughn- wata weirdo why dii ever date her in the 1st place. now i ahve u!
    Syd- lets get outa here for good!
    Weiss- yes lets
     
  11. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    Okay, if she pulled the trigger how did Weiss shoot her first? And what Vaughn said is kinda weird... Anyway.

    AT THE CIA
    "Agents, we are glad to hear that you are ok," Kendall was saying. But Sydney didn't look alright. Her best friend had been killed. She had been crying since they left her house. Just then Will entered.
    "Um... I was told you wanted to see me? Oh, my G-d. Syd, what happened?"
    "F-Fr-Francie's dead...."
    "What?" Will whispered. "That's impossible. We just saw her this morning, and now she's dead by tonight?"
    "No, you didn't see her, that was a double." said Vaughn, as if that would explain everything, while pulling Sydney into a hug as she cried heavily on his shoulder.
    "What?" Said Will, tears in his eyes.
     
  12. Chanel

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    You mean to tell me that i was in love with someone else! said will with tears still in his eyes. I was in love wiht someone who didnt exist!
    Syd then cut in- will lets go home and well make some dinner.
    on there way home -

    I think you could use a nice cup of tea will~syd
    MAyb i think i just want to rest~will
    ok sure well do that~

    at home~

    will is sleeping he is awaken by a noise

    Francie!~ will
    he see s afigure sure enough there is francie right there
    FRANCIE!~will
    syd comes in to see will standing up screaming at francie
    Syd~ FRANCIE!!! WHAT THE-
     
  13. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Francie-''Hey guys I know I have a lot of explianing to do but I really work for the FIB.''

    Syd-''The FIB?''

    Francie-''Yeah this werido named alice kiddnaped me one night.''

    Syd-''But I saw you you were dead.''

    Francie-''That wasn't me that was my twin, Lizzie.''

    Will-''How do we know that your not lying to us like everyone else and what about your resterant?''


    Kelli
     
  14. Chanel

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    im just wondering.. kelli... did u mean fbi or fib..just wondering... cuase there might be another org. tat i don know of. but i love how u named her lizzie.. ok for the next part!

    "dont worry you can trust me"
    suddnely will got up and hugged francie.
    "sydney then thought how could they really now it was her. She started getting suspicious
    "will get away from her!"
    syd knew something strange was goign on. and she was almost positive that francie wasnt really francie! it wsa FREPLICA!
     
  15. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    The FBI sorry about that.

    Syd-''How come I never knew you had a twin? And I was your best friend?''
    Francie-''You are my best friend you know that Syd.''
    Syd-''How can I be sure?''

    Kelli
     
  16. Kara

    Kara eternally nostalgic

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    "When we were in college you got so drunk one night that you kissed me." Francie said.
    Will turned to Sydney. "You did what?!?"
    Sydney almost started crying. She hadn't told anyone about that.
    "It is you!" she said. "Where have you been all this time?"
     
  17. Sunfire_77

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    Hmm I shall try this! :)


    Francie opened her arms to sydney.

    "Its a long story."

    Sydney didn't say anything to her.but hugged her and smiled.

    "Francie. I am so glad your back."

    "Ya know Francie you could atleast consider that I am here and give me a hug." said will

    Francie smiled then pulled will into the hug.

    Just then a man walked up to sydney with a package.
     
  18. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    k I haven't done this for a while but

    Just then her cell phone rang

    Syd-Hello

    Vaughn-Hey

    Syd-were are you

    Vaughn-Were do you think I am.

    Syd-At work

    The door bell rang

    Syd-I have to get the door.

    Vaughn-ok

    She opened ther door to only see Vaughn standing there in front of her

    Syd-Vaughn

    Vaughn-Hey
     
  19. Sunfire_77

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    Good job aliaskelli! What happens next come on! *Sits on chair and wait* :)
     
  20. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    Syd hung up her phone.
    SYD: hey.
    Vaughn: hey
    SYD: at work were we?
    VAughn: Surprise.
     

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