I know it's a bit Cliche' but whatevr floats my boat. It's my first Fic, constructive criticism and comments Please!!!!
I have most of it written but I'm not finished yet. (I don't like cliffhangers but It all depends on whether I'm allowed to get on or not)
Bon Voyage!! ^_^
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Chapter 1- Part 1
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Sydney ran down the hall as fast as she could. Someone was following her, but she didn’t know who. Ahead of her she could hear pounding footsteps. Thoughts were running through her brain. Who’s behind me? Who’s ahead of me? Why am I running?
Though she wanted to stop running, her legs were growing weak and her lungs were burning. She knew if she stopped, that something would get her. As she turned the corner, she stopped dead in her tracks.
Before her, lay two figures. A man in a black ski mask was struggling with his victim. Syd couldn’t see his face. She saw the masked assailants’s weapon. An Ice Pic. Oh my g-d, Sydney thought. Suddenly, the room changed. She was back at Valenko‘s mansion in Mackay. Though, now, the man who was putting up the struggle wasn’t Valenko. It was Vaughn.
Sydney watched in horror as history repeated itself. The two fought until finally a fatal mistake was made and Vaughn fell to the ground. Sydney’s heart lurched. “VAUGHN!!!” She screamed with all her might and this caused her adversary to turn around and face her.
This time, knowing who was under the mask, she pounced on him letting he rage control her. She didn’t care about her former lover or that he might kill her. All she cared about was Vaughn. Her swift motions were countered by her opponent’s, but she soon had him beat. Finding a knife she plunged it at him at sliced into his torso as hard as she could. But he still remained standing and unharmed. Trying hard, Sydney fought him to the best of her abilities but he seemed super human. He knocked her down, and reached into his pocket and pulled out a gun. Helpless Sydney sat there, ready to die.
A second before the trigger was pulled, Vaughn managed to maneuver his body in front of her’s to absorb the bullet. “NOOOO!!! VAUGHN!!! Oh my g-d, oh my g-d! Why- why did you do that?” she managed to say as she sobbed. Tears streaking her face fell on the floor and made a puddle. Lying in Sydney’s arms Vaughn wiped away a tear and simply replied, “Because I love you.” His eyes shut and caused Sydney to scream in pain. “Vaughn no!!! Wake up Vaughn. Vaughn, love you too. Vaughn..... Vaughn......
Vaughn’s murder took off his mask, but it wasn’t Noah Hicks. It was Sydney.
I have most of it written but I'm not finished yet. (I don't like cliffhangers but It all depends on whether I'm allowed to get on or not)
Bon Voyage!! ^_^
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Chapter 1- Part 1
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sydney ran down the hall as fast as she could. Someone was following her, but she didn’t know who. Ahead of her she could hear pounding footsteps. Thoughts were running through her brain. Who’s behind me? Who’s ahead of me? Why am I running?
Though she wanted to stop running, her legs were growing weak and her lungs were burning. She knew if she stopped, that something would get her. As she turned the corner, she stopped dead in her tracks.
Before her, lay two figures. A man in a black ski mask was struggling with his victim. Syd couldn’t see his face. She saw the masked assailants’s weapon. An Ice Pic. Oh my g-d, Sydney thought. Suddenly, the room changed. She was back at Valenko‘s mansion in Mackay. Though, now, the man who was putting up the struggle wasn’t Valenko. It was Vaughn.
Sydney watched in horror as history repeated itself. The two fought until finally a fatal mistake was made and Vaughn fell to the ground. Sydney’s heart lurched. “VAUGHN!!!” She screamed with all her might and this caused her adversary to turn around and face her.
This time, knowing who was under the mask, she pounced on him letting he rage control her. She didn’t care about her former lover or that he might kill her. All she cared about was Vaughn. Her swift motions were countered by her opponent’s, but she soon had him beat. Finding a knife she plunged it at him at sliced into his torso as hard as she could. But he still remained standing and unharmed. Trying hard, Sydney fought him to the best of her abilities but he seemed super human. He knocked her down, and reached into his pocket and pulled out a gun. Helpless Sydney sat there, ready to die.
A second before the trigger was pulled, Vaughn managed to maneuver his body in front of her’s to absorb the bullet. “NOOOO!!! VAUGHN!!! Oh my g-d, oh my g-d! Why- why did you do that?” she managed to say as she sobbed. Tears streaking her face fell on the floor and made a puddle. Lying in Sydney’s arms Vaughn wiped away a tear and simply replied, “Because I love you.” His eyes shut and caused Sydney to scream in pain. “Vaughn no!!! Wake up Vaughn. Vaughn, love you too. Vaughn..... Vaughn......
Vaughn’s murder took off his mask, but it wasn’t Noah Hicks. It was Sydney.